Oh, yes, good point about Victoria's POV in the sex scene. I wouldn't have mentioned the explicitness issue at all, except that many people do shy away from girlslash if they think there's going to be a graphic sex scene. Unfair, but true, and so I wanted to reassure nervous readers.

When I was re-reading the story just now, prior to writing up the rec, the ending made me get all teary-eyed again. Just so you know. :-)